Character+Development

Character Development By Ben Murray

Step 1

5 Positive Consequence: 1) We could stop people from dying with it and use it to keep people living, with cancer and other diseases until we find a cure. 2) You could live with loved ones longer. 3) You could accomplish your entire bucket list. 4) You could more than one career. 5) Play sports even when your old.

5 Negative Consequences: 1) Everybody would fight over it, there could be WW3. 2) There would be over population. 3) It wouldn't be evenly distributed and you might have to watch some of your friends or family die while you lived on. 4) There would be overdoses where people could die or become younger than they wanted. 5) Any religion with a afterlife would be abandoned and people would forget morals.

Step 2

1) That he will be unexpectedly pulled into a big armed conflict over the newly discovered Fountain of Youth. 2) That he to proud for his own good. 3) That he was bullied early in life. 4) He never gives up. 5) A desk clerk. 6) Mozart. 7) He is a casual christian. 8) He likes the Lord of the Rings. 9) Always where's sports shorts and runners. 10) No doesn't he is a rather good person. 11) He played hockey when he was younger and likes Gretzky. 12) That he could join the army. 13) Winning a world wide hunting competition. 14) Tripping in a televised track meet and breaking his nose. 15) Not trying hard in high school until grade 11. 16) He hates spiders. 17) Being in a car accident and being injured in the legs and face. 18) Winning a national cross country event. 19) That he wins the upcoming provincial hockey tournament. 20) Likes shooting things. 21) His parents stopping him from joining the army. 22) Breaking his spine and not being able to use his legs. 23) His older brother who joined the army oat the end of school. 24) Very strict woman. In her 40's doesn't like him in danger. Won't let her second son join the army. 25) Lay ed back and casual. Teaches him to hunt. Disagrees with not letting him join the army like his older brother. 26) With his parents until he was 20 when he would move out to an apartment. 27) He has an older brother and a younger brother. He wants to be like his older brother. 28) His older brother hunted as well and when he was 18 joined the the army. He is into sports and a rugby player. His younger brother is 14 and is just starting high school. Also into sports but wants to be a mechanic. 29) It is messy with clothes everywhere. There are lots of books and trophies. There is a single bed to one side. A track meet running trophy, a broken NHL hockey stick and a hand made hunting knife given to him by his dad. 30) November 5, 1991. He was born under the sign of Scorpio. 31) If he went into exile he would take a first aid kit, his hunting knife, money, cellphone, a journal he cold write in and lots of books. 32) He is angry because his mother wont let him join the army like his older brother. 33) Sports help quiet his mind that is partly why he plays them. 34) That the car accident he had been in didn't just break his legs that were repaired but also his spine. 36) How long he can live his parents house, whether he can join the army or not. 37) Often his cat which he thinks is an airbag from his car accident nightmare. 38) Friendly and athletic and very alert. 39) Practices karate and yoga. 40) Hockey coach to set a good example. 41) Probably run away join the army without his parents consent and go to Afghanistan. 42) Appreciative but hurt in a way. 43) A well built thin running body frame. 44) He likes to procrastinate at a lot of things. 45) His name and brothers names are ?

Step 3

The Setting: Its in 2010 and life is normal and boring. When the Fountain of Youth is discovered and people start seeking it out.

Step 4

The Main Conflict: When the main character gets pulled into a conflict over the wright full owners of the Fountain of Youth as a Canadian. People start fighting over it from Nations like Canada, the US, Russia and Israel to drug cartels and terrorists.

Short Story

Rough Plot: Rising Action: A teenager is trying to get into the army like his older brother but his mom won't let him. When the fountain of youth is discovered and he is in the wrong place at the wrong time. He is forced to fight to protect the rest of his family. Climax: He makes a friend who is in the same position. With the Canadian armed forces they fight for there lives, family and their country to stop anyone from taking control of the fountain of youth. Falling Action: Slowly everyone starts go power hungry over the fountain and he rises ranks until he has a choice of what to do with the fountain. Destroy it or keep it for Canada